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Story Telling Tips

Javnia

This thread is to help others with writing. Please add your thoughts and recommendations.

How to Write a Strong Short Story

Writing a short story is a focused exercise in storytelling. Unlike novels, which can explore multiple arcs and large casts over hundreds of pages, a short story concentrates on a single emotional moment, conflict, revelation, or transformation. The goal is to create a powerful emotional effect within a limited word count—typically between 1,000 and 7,000 words.

1. Find and Refine Your Idea

A successful short story begins with clarity. Before writing, understand the world of your story and the motivations of your characters.

Ask yourself:

Who is involved?
What is happening?
Where does the story take place?
When does it occur?
Why are events unfolding?
How do the characters respond?

Even if every detail never appears on the page, knowing the answers helps create believable characters and consistent storytelling.

Start With “What If?”

Many stories begin with a simple question:

What if a police officer discovered the outbreak was intentional?
What if a survivor arrived at a barricade already infected?
What if a character had to choose between family and survival?

Strong “what if” questions naturally generate conflict.

Start Close to the End

Short stories have little room for lengthy setup. Begin as close to the climax or major conflict as possible. Drop readers directly into action (in media res) so tension begins immediately.

Focus the Conflict

Most short stories revolve around one primary conflict:

External conflict: survival, war, disaster, pursuit
Internal conflict: guilt, fear, grief, regret

Trying to include too many major conflicts can weaken the story’s impact.

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2. Develop Focused Characters

Short fiction works best with a small cast. Too many characters dilute emotional focus and consume valuable space.

Keep the Cast Small

Two or three important characters are often enough.

Give Every Character a Desire

Every character should want something—even something simple like safety, approval, or revenge. Desire drives action.

Use Implied Characterization

You do not need long biographies. Reveal personality through small details:

how a character speaks
what they notice
how they dress
how they react under stress
habits and gestures

A single detail can reveal more than a paragraph of exposition.

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3. Draft the Story

Silence Your Internal Editor

First drafts should be written quickly and freely. Do not stop constantly to perfect sentences. Momentum matters more than polish during drafting.

Show, Don’t Tell

Instead of saying:

“He was terrified.”

show the fear through action:

His hands shook so badly he dropped the magazine while reloading.

Action and dialogue create stronger emotional engagement.

Make Every Word Matter

In short fiction, every sentence should accomplish something:

reveal character
build atmosphere
increase tension
advance the plot

If a sentence does none of these, consider cutting it.

Experiment With Structure

Short stories can use different formats:

traditional narration
nonlinear timelines
multiple perspectives
epistolary formats using:
- newspaper articles
- letters
- emails
- text messages
- reports

These structures can deepen immersion and variety.

Understand Basic Story Structure

Many stories follow a five-act dramatic structure:

Introduction — establish character and situation
Rising Action — tension and complications grow
Climax — decisive emotional or physical turning point
Falling Action — immediate consequences
Resolution — final emotional note or outcome

Even very short stories often contain these elements in compressed form.

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4. Edit Ruthlessly

Good short stories are often shaped more in revision than in drafting.

Take a Break

Set the draft aside for a few days. Distance helps you see flaws more clearly.

Cut Excess Material

Remove scenes, dialogue, or descriptions that do not serve the story. Sometimes your favorite passages must be removed if they slow pacing or weaken focus.

Read Aloud

Reading aloud helps identify:

awkward dialogue
repetitive wording
weak rhythm
unnatural phrasing

If something sounds wrong, it usually is.

Polish the Ending

A strong ending resonates emotionally. The final lines should leave readers thinking about the story after it ends.

Great endings often:

reveal new understanding
create irony
deliver emotional impact
reframe earlier events

Avoid Excessive Exposition

Short stories thrive on implication. Readers do not need every detail explained. A few carefully chosen lines can suggest an entire world.

Trust the reader to connect the dots.

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A strong short story does not try to tell everything. It tells one meaningful thing clearly, emotionally, and efficiently. The smaller scale is not a limitation—it is the source of the form’s power.

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Javnia

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Javnia

Primarily RP is storytelling. Storytelling role-play is a collaborative, interactive narrative form where participants adopt characters within a fictional world to create a story together. Unlike scripted acting, it emphasizes spontaneous, nation-driven decisions, often guided by the moderator to shape the plot through interaction.

We are testing a point based dice rolling RP system in “This is an Exercise”. It is a test of a system and does not affect the ongoing RP. If it works and people like it then we will approach the leadership for consideration to apply to the RP at large.

Most storytelling RP is a nation picking a topic they want to tell a story about and then telling your story. I’ve done one about the Mt Agung volcano and another about the ongoing problems with the Lazerus virus. These stories are connected and they are used in my JAP news thread as well to build my world view. My view is darker then the baseline of our story world.

Another method of storytelling is interactive such as the “We are One” conference in which every one takes turns adding to the story with a common goal. Interactive storytelling is best discussed in the Discord site to get an agreement on where your story will go and with what limitations before you start the story. Interactive roleplay can be fun as the story takes “unexpected” twists as each nation puts their spin on the story.

Point based story telling uses a structured, numerical budget to build nations, allowing for highly customized abilities, while freestyle (freeform) roleplay abandons rigid rules in favor of collaborative storytelling based on narration. Point-based systems focus on balance and mechanics, whereas freestyle focuses on expression and narrative freedom. Point based systems are grounded in mechanical realism and balance, but can be “crunchy” or complicated to set up. However, you can build exactly the type of nation you want rather than picking a “predefined” nation. Freeform focuses heavily on creative writing. Freeform offers maximum freedom for creative expression and storytelling, but lacks objective, impartial rules for resolving conflicts.

I hope this helps and if you have any questions feel free to contact me.

Javnia

Nation-state roleplay works best when the country feels alive beyond armies and diplomacy. The strongest stories usually combine politics, economics, military affairs, disasters, personalities, and ordinary people reacting to events.

Here are practical ways to make a nation-state RP feel deeper and easier to sustain long-term.

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Building a Strong Nation RP

1. Give the Nation Internal Tensions

Perfect countries become boring quickly. Internal problems create stories automatically.

Examples:

· Rival political parties

· Military vs civilian government conflict

· Rich industrial core vs poor frontier provinces

· Religious or cultural regionalism

· Corruption scandals

· Labor strikes during wartime

· Refugee crises

· Disputes over technology or AI use

Example:

Javnia’s rapid industrial expansion causes pollution protests in coastal provinces while military hawks demand even more shipbuilding.

That instantly creates:

· elections

· protests

· media stories

· sabotage plots

· foreign influence attempts

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2. Use Multiple Perspectives

Don’t tell every story from the president or king.

Use:

· journalists

· soldiers

· factory workers

· diplomats

· spies

· pilots

· police

· scientists

· smugglers

· mayors

· civilians during disasters

This makes the world feel real.

Example:
A naval war can be shown through:

· admiral briefing

· sailor diary

· JAP news report

· grieving family

· dockworker strike

· enemy propaganda

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3. Treat Logistics as Story Fuel

Infrastructure creates believable stakes.

Interesting RP topics:

· fuel shortages

· rail bottlenecks

· power grid failures

· damaged ports

· famine

· black markets

· reconstruction efforts

· strategic minerals

Wars become much more interesting when:

“The fleet cannot sail because the refinery workers are on strike.”

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4. Create Ongoing Story Arcs

Think in seasons.

Example long arc:

1. Election scandal

2. Riots

3. Military deployed

4. Foreign intelligence interference discovered

5. Assassination attempt

6. Emergency powers declared

7. Provinces threaten autonomy

8. Border enemies exploit weakness

One event should naturally create the next.

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5. Avoid Constant Victory

Interesting nations suffer setbacks.

Good RP often comes from:

· failed offensives

· economic recessions

· political embarrassment

· natural disasters

· intelligence failures

· unpopular treaties

Players respect believable weakness more than unstoppable superpowers.

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6. Make Technology Consistent

If our setting is near-modern:

· drones matter

· satellites matter

· logistics matter

· cyber warfare matters

· propaganda matters

Avoid sudden “super weapons” unless the whole setting supports them.

Consistency is more immersive than escalation.

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Plot Ideas

Political Plots

The Missing Ballots

Thousands of ballots disappear during an election in a swing province. Every party blames each other.

Possible outcomes:

· riots

· military investigation

· foreign interference accusations

· emergency recount

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The Governor’s Secession Threat

A wealthy outer island province threatens autonomy after tax disputes with the capital.

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The Silent Coup

Military officers quietly pressure the civilian government without openly seizing power.

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Military Plots

Ghost Fleet Incident

A convoy disappears during heavy storms. Weeks later damaged ships return with confused crews and missing personnel.

Could be:

· espionage

· disease

· supernatural

· experimental weapons

· misinformation

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Border Mobilization

Two nations mobilize forces for “exercises” that slowly become real war preparations.

Great for:

· diplomacy

· spy stories

· propaganda

· accidental escalation

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Failed Wonder Weapon

A new fighter jet or battleship catastrophically fails during public demonstrations.

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Disaster Plots

Volcanic Winter

A major eruption lowers temperatures and damages harvests worldwide.

Creates:

· food shortages

· migration

· unrest

· trade wars

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The Great Blackout

Cyberattack collapses national power infrastructure for days.

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Oil Spill Crisis

A tanker accident devastates fisheries and coastal tourism.

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Economic Plots

Currency Collapse

Rapid military spending destroys public confidence in the national currency.

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Railway Boom

A giant infrastructure program transforms remote provinces but sparks corruption scandals.

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Corporate-State Rivalry

Mega corporations begin acting like independent political powers.

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Intelligence / Spy Plots

Double Agent in Naval Command

A respected admiral is accused of leaking fleet movements.

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Embassy Defection

A diplomat defects with classified military plans.

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Phantom Broadcasts

Unauthorized radio stations spread anti-government propaganda nationwide.

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International RP Ideas

Alliance Conference

Multiple nations negotiate:

· military basing

· trade rights

· technology sharing

· refugee policy

These are great because they create:

· diplomacy

· betrayal

· secret clauses

· future wars

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Proxy War

Two great powers back opposing factions in a smaller conflict.

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Naval Arms Race

Countries compete over carriers, submarines, missiles, and strategic ports.

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Story Structures That Work Extremely Well

The “Countdown”

Something bad is approaching:

· asteroid

· invasion

· election

· plague

· debt collapse

Each post advances the clock.

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The “Investigation”

A journalist, detective, or intelligence officer uncovers a conspiracy over many posts.

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The “Campaign”

Military operation broken into phases:

1. buildup

2. reconnaissance

3. initial attack

4. counterattack

5. attrition

6. peace talks

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The “Recovery”

After a war/disaster:

· rebuilding

· corruption

· trauma

· veterans

· memorials

· political blame

Recovery stories are often more interesting than battles.

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Tips for Writing Better RP Posts

Keep Posts Focused

One strong event is better than 15 rushed events.

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Use Realistic Consequences

If:

· ships sink

· cities burn

· economies crash

then society should react.

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Leave Openings for Others

Good RP invites responses.

Example:

“Unidentified submarines were detected near the strait.”

Now other players can react.

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Use Media Formats

Different formats make the world richer:

· newspaper articles

· speeches

· military memos

· leaked documents

· radio transcripts

· emergency alerts

· propaganda posters

· interviews

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Good Nation RP Balance

A believable nation usually has:

· strengths

· weaknesses

· allies

· rivals

· internal divisions

· economic limits

· cultural identity

· history

· ambitions

· fears

That balance creates stories naturally for months or years of gameplay.